This term in writing we have been looking at writing descriptive pieces about setting, character and action. Below is some of my best sentences. Which one do you like the best?
Friday, November 26, 2021
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Hi Ella,I really like your sentences on Lily and Steve maybe next time remember to use a different color on pink like black.From your BFF Alyssa🌼
ReplyDeleteHELLO ELLA,
ReplyDeleteI really like this because you have added lots of writing next time can change the colour of your words.What is your favourite out of all your sentences?
From Lucy
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